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Poetry and Microfiction
Creative writing goes beyond stating facts by attempting to weave in and transmit ideas, images and feelings. The
purpose is not simply to catalog events like a newspaper but to also show and
even create emotions. For an analogy, consider the difference between a
photograph and a painting. Writing on this page includes
various genres: assorted departments of poetry, such as the narrative, lyric, dramatic and prose
poems. It also includes the
relatively new genres of microfiction. This is abbreviated story telling
that often implies or assumes knowledge of facts. Flash Fiction and
Flash Plays are condensed, intense versions of short stories and drama.
Genres
Narrative poetry tells a story. It has a beginning, middle and end-not necessarily in that order. Because of this structure, you should be able to sense a passage of time. The ending can be either conclusive or open with no resolution.
Lyric poetry uses one central topic as its theme and is often addressed to the reader. It can be written in a wide range of forms, songs, elegies, ode, etc. They focus on one subject throughout.
The Prose Poem is not free verse nor prose but a genre in between. It differs from prose by the use of rhythmic and sound repetitions, intensity of language and, from free verse because there are no line breaks.
Flash Fiction is very short fiction that gets right to the meat of the story without a preamble. There is often implied characterization.
"Some Bad News" Uncle Will overlooks the island stop lights and speed
zones. Veering left across two lanes of coming cars. We enter a tabby marsh
road, oyster shells spew out behind us. Squeezing the arm rest like an orange my mouth drops into an "O." Up front my father doesn't miss a
beat, hatches plans for line dancing. His older
brother Will answers with his
hands. The 1978 Buick clips palm trees, follows
a tidal creek. Far back, I enter the crab shack. The brothers are calling
"Hey, bo' " to locals, a coke in one hand, to break blue-crab
shells, a Miller in the
other to wash them down. A polite nod to foreigners with king-crab legs and Michelob. Beer comes and goes
like a quick summer
squall empties vanish
through the top's center hole. I know better than to keep up. Learned the hard way. (Once
squatted and peed on a parlor chair, thinking it a toilet.) Worn and baggy as his
blue shorts, Uncle Will said , "Got some bad news," taps his chest twice.
"Two
spots. Can't operate. Quit smoking this week."
Across the marsh, a boat motor sputters. I stammer, "I am so sorry."
Drowned half way out by my father's boom,
"Well, you had a good run." Those brown eyes stared at each other.
"Yeah...... I had a good run." "Blood Ties" Loaded up with grits and fried whiting Daddy and his dying brother Will go grave hunting, take me along, a sealing wax to fasten their deeds. With no regard for the speed-bump Uncle Will enters Bonaventure Graveyard sails between the brick posts, flight practice for his wings, I guess. On flat land, risen where graves mound one site is left in the clan plot. Grandmother, who lived to ripe old age, lays back to belly to that first escapee from Ireland. But consumption killed their father so young that his family took him back to their own half-full lot. I began a solemn discourse- "the canopy of stone angels, susurration of Spanish moss." Would have missed their departure hadn't they stopped to scuff dirt on some cousin's old grave. At supper, my instructions came Will is to be buried next to the Father whom he didn't know but was said to resemble. And in due time, Daddy goes next to Will. They were blood, you see, and everyone knows blood stains and binds. "Every Little Bit Helps" Butcher knife and ragged broom in hand, Uncle Will loped over the dunes, then Daddy, me on his shoulders my pudgy hands gripped his blond hair and the rubber game ball. They sat me near the surf and cut the broom into a swinging bat, the ball into a hemisphere for pitching in the game of half rubber. The split ball sailed toward home-plate. Sweat glistened like armor as they charged like knights looming over the low tide infield. Wins and losses were quick-lived. From nowhere, they drew a crowd of cheers. I dripped sand and salt into white spires, made towersas high as the sky. Again this March, my hands leaned into the wet sand and felt those astonishing castles I once built. Now beyond my reach. Almost twins, Daddy and Uncle Will approached moving past sea oats at a slow gait, carrying nothing but loose skin. Still, the laughter went down to the bone. I dipped a fistful of wet sand, started a castle. Every little bit helps. "Lift Off"
Flash plays are intense, one act dramas.
"Production Problems"
Persons In Dialogue HOMER: author DIONYSUS: director Scene: Corporate Office of Achaean Productions, Acropolis, Athens, Greece . 900 B. C. {Curtain up: Dressed in togas, characters approach and greet each other. They sit.} DIONYSUS: My dear HOMER, welcome to Athens ! Great news, we finally signed Jocasta for the lead. We “have” our Helen. Big bucks for the Pretty Lady, but at last we are ready for production! HOMER: Delighted about Jocasta. {HOMER turns and glances out window} What a terrific view! I heard the city was going to build the Parthenon up here. DIONYSUS: Ha! Not this century. Now about the “Iliad”—fascinating story- sure to be a blockbuster. We’re off to location this week, just as you demanded. {HOMER smiles.} HOMER: Well, being on site at the actual battleground where Hector died should cram every stone bench with spectators. DIONYSUS: And that’s what we want—a full house! We’re lining up the rowers for the trip now; should take about five ships. {HOMER reacts in a startled manner} HOMER: Only five? What about the Silver Horse? Cut in sections, it alone will take at least six ships. {DIONYSUS clears his throat} DIONYSUS: Uhhh, about the horse—Jocasta’s fee put us over budget. {HOMER stands.} Take it easy, HOMER. Sit down. After all, it was you that insisted on getting her. {HOMER paces.} HOMER: But, but...... the crux of the story is the silver horse. How it shines so brightly the men of Troy are blinded during the battle. (DIONYSUS shrugs and gestures with his hands.} DIONYSUS: Sorry, Homer. It is not going to happen. The backers just cannot swing the extra financing. Don’t worry; you’ll have the whole voyage to Hellespont to rewrite that part of the story. Just be sure to come up with a prop that is cheap to build, something cheap as wood. {Curtain} End
"Bone Cold" Cast: MRS. JONES – lovely
young widow of wealthy businessman, Emery Jones Setting: Office at Pict Studio- two chairs & a desk. Mr. Wells is seated at desk. Props: Bottle of brandy, glasses and telephone
Act One: (DOOR CLOSES. MRS. JONES STRIDES ONSTAGE IN AN OSTENTATIOUS MANNER.) MR. WELLS: (STANDS) Come in, Mrs. Jones. I am George Wells, your late husband’s consultant here at Pict Studios. MRS. JONES :(SMIRKS) Well, Mr. Wells. How are you? (MRS. JONES IS SEATED AND PRIMPS, SMOOTHING HER DRESS) MR. WELLS : (CLEARS THROAT) Uh, yes. My condolences on your husband’s passing. MRS. JONES :(SIMPERS) Thanks, he was a sweet old thing. MR. WELLS: Errr, yes, yes, indeed. (DEEP,
SOLEMN VOICE) He was a fine man, a chief of industry, a self-made millionaire. Yes, a fine man.
(SLIGHT COUGH) MRS. JONES: I came for my surprise present. The week before he “passed”, Emery had me sign stacks of legal papers (SIGH)-it took forever. (BRIGHTLY) Said I’d have a big surprise after he was gone. MR. WELLS: Present? Oh, yes, it is like a present. He wanted to be sure you’d be well provided for, just in case. And let me assure you, he got the best money could buy. MRS. JONES: (CONDESCENDS) Well, of course. MR. WELLS: (SHUFFLES PAPERS ON DESK) Let me see….. Here it is, the legal form, all signed and sealed. May I see a driver’s license, to verify your identity? Just a formality. MRS. JONES: (REACHES IN
HER PURSE AND HANDS HIM AN ID CARD.) Here. MR. WELLS: Ah, yes, a striking photo. I must admit, I am amazed that you came in on your own. Would you like to hear the details? MRS. JONES: (RISES AND WALKS ABSENTLY DOWNSTAGE) Pict Studio, what’s a pict? It sounds like a movie set. MR. WELLS: Movies? Well uh, we’ve always considered movies, but ………. MRS. JONES: What is that? (POINTS AT THE AUDIENCE, THE FOURTH WALL OF THE OFFICE) That painting of a blue swordsman on the wall? Is it the studio logo? Like the MGM lion? (JONES RETURNS TO HER CHAIR, SITS AND TAKES OUR HER COMPACT MIRROR TO APPLIES LIPSTICK DURING FOLLOWING DIALOGUE BY WELLS.) MR. WELLS: (PONTIFICATES) Yes, my dear, the Pict warrior is the company logo. Trouble with people today, we’re too civilized. We used to be wild Picts- tattooed in blue, the scourge of Britain, as feared as a Druid. We’d raid shrines; slaughter cattle and when a chief died, we’d bury his wives with him. We were dangerous, very dangerous. (SADLY) But look at us now- peaceable and proper. MRS. JONES: Yeah, anyway, about my surprise, I bet it is a screen test for a movie, right? (RISES, PIROUETTES ABOUT THE STAGE) I’ll be stunning, my face will fill the silver screen, be bigger than life. I’ll drink champagne with Brad Pitt and the audience won’t even notice him. (RETURNS TO HER CHAIR) MR. WELLS: Er... yes, a movie can definitely be shot. Now, the details. your late husband came in several weeks ago, gave us your vital statistics-weight, height, heart rate. I must say, he certainly seemed chipper for his age. Who would have thought he’d slip off that embankment and break his neck! At least he got his last wish—to be stored in a frozen state. MRS. JONES: (EXACERBATED SIGH) Yes, Emery had all sorts of odd ideas. Well, let’s get on with it. I don’t want to hear the details. I am ready for action. MR. WELLS: (SMILES) Aren’t you a refreshing change! Usually we have to send an escort. Will you take brandy, Mrs. Jones? It’s a seven star import. (POURS A DRINK AND HANDS GLASS TO JONES WHO DRINKS) MRS. JONES: This has such a bitter taste. I feel a chill down to my bones. (RUBS HER ARMS) Strange, usually brandy warms me up. Mr. Wells: (SETTLES BACK IN HIS CHAIR) While we wait, let me sprout just a tad- I am so proud of our company. We have state of the art equipment; a special high tech unit with a battery back-up in case of a power outage. Our work is guaranteed a minimum of 150 years, and I am proud to say, there is no longer any dizziness. MRS. JONES: Ok, ok,that sounds fine. I could leave the screen test as a legacy to my fans. MR. WELLS: You are something else! No wonder Mr. Jones was so determined. Alright, I agree. The entire production will be made into a movie, and I personally guarantee global distribution. MRS. JONES: It must be the excitement, but I feel faint, and so cold that I can barely speak. (SLIPS TO FLOOR, DROPPING GLASS) MR. WELLS: It is just the sedative in the brandy taking affect, numbing all your motor reflexes. Let me ring down to the cryogenics unit, be sure all is ready, and get someone to video each step. (PAUSE) Usually wives and widows aren’t as eager as you. (PICKS UP PHONE) Danny, got a client hot to trot. Send up the best gurney, the one with the lilac tubing and find somebody with a camcorder to tape the entire procedure. Yes, I said camcorder. She wants movies. Yep!……… Amazing woman! (MRS. JONES GRASPS HER THROAT,
TRYING TO TALK, JUST MAKING SOUNDS.) (MRS. JONES SQUIRMS ABOUT ON
THE FLOOR) End
Poetry and Flash Fiction Links
Zine Markets Recursive Angel Publishing Information and Free Programs-see section on Books page In conclusion I offer a link to my favorite poem, "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" by T. S. Eliot.
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